I finally got this one finished. Krystal’s nearly losing her life to Count Ivanova on Halloween has major consequences when Hexanna blows off the near defeat. Krystal’s up and down relationship with the She-Legion goes down again, and Amazing Babe reacts poorly to discovering Krystal’s true heritage. In the middle of everything, the Aberration decides to tear up the town also. Can anything be salvaged, and can Krystal continue to hold everything together on her own?
For those not familiar with it, RetCon is shorthand for ‘Retroactive Continuity’. It’s a term that first came about in comic book circles. They occur when the writers have mucked up a story so badly that they need to rewrite a chunk of existing history. Sometimes they just happen when a writer thinks they have a better idea to tell a story in a more modern way. I’ll spare my opinion of most of those efforts.
Getting back on track, I had very limited information on Mister X’s character Hexanna when I wrote the first version of this story. I tried to take some creative liberties and made her a character with a magic staff who didn’t actually believe in magic. I thought it would be an interesting contradiction to explore. Probably a bad idea to start with, and once I learned more about Hexanna’s character, I decided a re-write was in order.
Without getting preachy, I feel that if somebody writes fan fiction, they should keep it as true to form as possible to the work of the original author. Ergo, I’m doing what I can to humanize and add some depth to the characters, but I do NOT want to change long established canon about them. Nuff said. 🙂 Here’s the story:
Considering parts 5 & 6 were supposed to just be a more detailed account of the events that were summarized at the end of Chapter 4, they turned into a monster. Chapter 6 is 16,712 words long, and has a few sex scenes, a few fight scenes, and A literal ton of plot and character advancement.
Things should start falling together for readers, giving them a better idea of the shape of things in MY version of Delta City. I’ve made a real effort to create a world with some depth and grit without going total emo melodrama.
As always, comments and feedback are welcome and encouraged. 🙂
This took far longer than I anticipated, but chapter 5 is finally out. This one is covering the events that were just skimmed over at the end of chapter 4. I felt that was a sloppy wrap up and I wanted to do something more proper. Chapter 6 will conclude that series of events and lead into the Halloween story I did. THAT will hopefully be ready next week. For now, enjoy chapter 5
My latest non-fan fiction piece of erotica is now posted. Find out what happens when an executive assistant catches her boss in a compromising position and decides she now has leverage to make her fantasies about him become reality