I finally got this one finished. Krystal’s nearly losing her life to Count Ivanova on Halloween has major consequences when Hexanna blows off the near defeat. Krystal’s up and down relationship with the She-Legion goes down again, and Amazing Babe reacts poorly to discovering Krystal’s true heritage. In the middle of everything, the Aberration decides to tear up the town also. Can anything be salvaged, and can Krystal continue to hold everything together on her own?
For those not familiar with it, RetCon is shorthand for ‘Retroactive Continuity’. It’s a term that first came about in comic book circles. They occur when the writers have mucked up a story so badly that they need to rewrite a chunk of existing history. Sometimes they just happen when a writer thinks they have a better idea to tell a story in a more modern way. I’ll spare my opinion of most of those efforts.
Getting back on track, I had very limited information on Mister X’s character Hexanna when I wrote the first version of this story. I tried to take some creative liberties and made her a character with a magic staff who didn’t actually believe in magic. I thought it would be an interesting contradiction to explore. Probably a bad idea to start with, and once I learned more about Hexanna’s character, I decided a re-write was in order.
Without getting preachy, I feel that if somebody writes fan fiction, they should keep it as true to form as possible to the work of the original author. Ergo, I’m doing what I can to humanize and add some depth to the characters, but I do NOT want to change long established canon about them. Nuff said. 🙂 Here’s the story:
Considering parts 5 & 6 were supposed to just be a more detailed account of the events that were summarized at the end of Chapter 4, they turned into a monster. Chapter 6 is 16,712 words long, and has a few sex scenes, a few fight scenes, and A literal ton of plot and character advancement.
Things should start falling together for readers, giving them a better idea of the shape of things in MY version of Delta City. I’ve made a real effort to create a world with some depth and grit without going total emo melodrama.
As always, comments and feedback are welcome and encouraged. 🙂
This took far longer than I anticipated, but chapter 5 is finally out. This one is covering the events that were just skimmed over at the end of chapter 4. I felt that was a sloppy wrap up and I wanted to do something more proper. Chapter 6 will conclude that series of events and lead into the Halloween story I did. THAT will hopefully be ready next week. For now, enjoy chapter 5
What’s a sexy witch without a bit of gothic horror added to the erotica around Halloween, right? Granted, I’d hoped to get this put out there earlier, BUT life got in the way. Anyway, read and see how our favorite heroine peril witch handles dealing with an infamous and powerful vampire lord.
And a day and a half earlier than it will appear at DangerBabeCentral…
This long chapter (38 pages) brings Witchfire’s initial foray into the world of superheroes to a close. Krystal and her ragtag group prepare to make their assault on Dragon Queen’s hidden base and rescue the She-Legion. Whose side is Geek really on though, and how far will he go to achieve his objectives? Who is the mysterious group backing Dragon Queen?
Most importantly, does Krystal have what it takes to be a heroine, especially when the time comes to make the tough choices?
Addenda: As of this morning (Oct 31, 2018), I’ve gone through and proof read the story yet again, and cleaned up several typos and reworded a few things for better story flow and sentence structure. I’ve also added a picture of the statue or figurine of the goddess Morrigan that inspired Witchfire’s costume. It appears in the story immediately after Witchfire is given her costume.
As an added note, let me know what you all like with my stories thus far. Feel free to share and tell others also. The more feedback and views I get, the more motivated I’m going to be to develop more stories. 😉
I’m not sure which of my stories are more popular right now, but it SEEMS like the superheroine peril stuff is getting the most attention. Either way, that’s what’s clicking mentally at the moment, sooooo…
Today I finished Witchfire, Part 3 – Azure Angel’s Destruction. This bit of extreme kink features the young busty ninja getting caught sneaking into the captured She-Legion base. She then foolishly challenges Dragon Queen to single combat for leadership of her army. After losing the fight, Azure Angel is completely dominated by Dragon Queen, who forces orgasm after orgasm from her until she’s broken.
Meanwhile, Krystal assumes the mantle of Witchfire and the remaining free heroines prepare to storm the base. Will they arrive in time?
Yes, I finished part 2 already. It’s what seems to be flowing mentally right now, so that’s what I’m writing. I’m still hoping to return to other stories in the VERY near future, but for now, you get this a week and half before it MAY appear at DBC
This chapter will address some (but not all) of the unusual behavior of the She-Legion towards Krystal in the first chapter. There’s FAR more going on than even has been revealed here however. Read on and see how our Strawberry Blonde witch escapes her predicament.
New story time! Part 1 of my new superheroine peril fan fiction based on the DangerBabeCentral.com characters and world. The series will definitely be a walk on the kinky side. Read the disclaimers on the top of the story’s page before continuing.
Also, I got some very good feedback on the Power Girl fan fiction and will be doing a rewrite there very soon. As a spoiler, there’s also going to be an evil version at some point. ComixFana and I have been batting around my plot there for ages.
Next project absolutely will be the Jillian sequel. I was just lacking in inspiration there the last few days. I intend to do my best to keep a balance between the fan fiction stuff and “normal” erotica.